O' True North

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O' True North Thou art our truest, North Star, One lone shine's, that's who you are, For you rose first and set the bar, Every last star followed their avatar, Nevermore a passing phase, You're evermore well-placed, Transformed our plain void space, Into a home for Heaven to grace. 2019 September 11 *2nd Place* Any Poem You Want to Write 180 words or Less ~~Caren Krutsinger

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Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 2:43:00 PM

William congratulations on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/17/2019 2:47:00 PM

Thanks, Constance!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/15/2019 5:33:00 PM

Beautiful! And a congrats to your win in the contest!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:54:00 PM

;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/15/2019 5:42:00 PM

Thanks, Brenda, and let us enjoy our well-deserving moments for the hour is fleeting though our hearts keep beating, with our memories of our greeting, ~ Aloha always William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/11/2019 6:43:00 PM

I really love this William! It is a bright star to wish upon and linger long to enjoy when it rises in evening skies. Beautiful and it is going into my faves my friend! I hope it is a top winner! Aloha xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/11/2019 7:01:00 PM

MAHALO Connie, for you, are a consistent neighbor at harboring Aloha ~ always William