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O Christmas Tree

I looked from left and then to right. To find the perfect, Christmas Tree. They all glowed with Heavenly light. Still none of them appealed to me. What did I want if not perfection? As I looked at this Sea of green. After a bit of contemplation. There in the back was the one I seen. A little bit bruised, laying on it's side Kind of neglected, thrown away Once I seen it my eyes opened wide I brought it home for my Christmas Day A Christmas Caroling Contest. Written Dec 21, 2012 First attempt at this style ( at least knowingly)

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Date: 1/8/2013 4:48:00 PM
Hi Richard, love the style and a good enough attempt ...always~ pd
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Linda, good to see you are spreading the Love.
Date: 1/8/2013 10:41:00 AM
Conrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 4:40:00 PM
Who is Conrad ?? What's he doing on my win? Sorry couldn't resist. Thanks for good wishes.
Date: 1/8/2013 10:38:00 AM
Conrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2013 9:33:00 AM
A nice, homey, Christmas write, Richard. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 9:48:00 AM
What a nice surprise, thanks for commenting.
Date: 12/22/2012 6:54:00 AM
good one, Richard,, enjoyed the read...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2012 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Harry
Date: 12/21/2012 9:00:00 PM
a bright carol Richard. Wishing you the best during the contest. My warmest thoughts and best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 10:11:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 12/21/2012 8:32:00 PM
What a great write Richard, actually found a tree one year just like that. Rollo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 8:37:00 PM
Good for you for giving it a home. In reality I have an artificial tree, the good news is we have a real Christmas. I hope you're is amazing Rollo. You seem like a good guy and I have enjoyed your visits.
Date: 12/21/2012 8:06:00 PM
This is beautiful Richard, a simply beautiful write! I truly loved reading this glorious and stupendous poem this evening! What a powerful message and awesomely portrayed piece my friend! Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 8:11:00 PM
Thanks Russell.

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