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my cat is dead and I weep my heart is broken in a few seconds it was done I felt the life fading from her and she was so still and in her death she was beautiful and utterly at peace and all the pain was gone _________________________________ March 16, 2015 Poetry/Fibonacci/O, the pain Copyright Protected, ID 15-654-563-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Entered in Any Poem #32 Contest, sponsor, A Poet Destroyer Honorable Mention

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Date: 8/18/2015 8:40:00 PM
BW.. Congrats on your wonderful winner write, I feel your pain here but grateful her pain is no more!
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:21:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write broken ! Heartfelt emotions truly expressed, great work!
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:15:00 AM
BW, Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:02:00 AM
broken, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:32:00 AM
Broken, It was an honor to read. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/23/2015 11:29:00 AM
A touching and eloquent description of the love bond you shared with your cat...as a cat owner and lover I can commiserate with you. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/20/2015 8:55:00 PM
My exact feelings, death in some cases is a welcome peace. I will fav this piece.
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Date: 3/18/2015 8:06:00 AM
Melancholy and enthralling. I loved every letter!
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Date: 3/17/2015 5:08:00 PM
Well written and strongly expressed. Losing a pet is always a sad experience. Our cat had to be put down, aged 17yrs; still miss it after a couple of years. // paul
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Date: 3/17/2015 11:31:00 AM
How sad it is to lose a beloved pet. To be with her while she's dying makes the passing even more difficult. My heart goes out to you and I could relate to the pain you expressed in this well-composed Fibonacci. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2015 2:40:00 AM
Sorry to read about losing your cat. I hope she lived a long life.
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Date: 3/17/2015 1:09:00 AM
Oh, I remember you saying how sick your cat was and her age...I'm sorry for your loss...they do become part of our families, sometimes even closer than some family...it's better when the end is peaceful...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/16/2015 11:54:00 PM
My heart weeps for the soul who feels the loss.....touching write Constance. Have a blessed week..........much love, james
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Date: 3/16/2015 10:04:00 PM
BW.. So sorry for your loss my friend, I'm glad it was peaceful!
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:29:00 PM
So heart wrenching, Constance. it reminds me so much of the day I had to have Callie Cat put to sleep. We buried her out back by the porch. It is weird to know their life just goes out of them and they are gone. Oh my! Sorry for your loss.
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Date: 3/16/2015 6:41:00 PM
Your touching poem made me tear up Constance because I still grieve my cat who passed away 9 years ago. They touch our lives in such a special way. I am sorry about your loss. Blessings, Connie 7
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Date: 3/16/2015 3:30:00 PM
Sadness prevades this work..I wonder if they will be there?..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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