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November Dreams

She presents the chill that gives us those frosty dawns then she waltzes with the wind making snowflakes swirl as she gathers up the storm with her icy pirouettes

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/13/2014 3:09:00 AM

Absolutely awesome piece my dear friend Joseph! Big congrats again for another great win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/12/2014 10:15:00 PM

I knew "icy pirouettes" was going to be a big winner. Congrats! BG

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/12/2014 5:32:00 PM

Wonderful and nice piece,Joseph...Congrats on your well deserved win...

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2014 1:29:00 PM

Such wonderful personification! Well done!!

David Mohn

Date: 10/12/2014 11:23:00 AM

Very nicely written and original Joseph...love the feel of it...congrats

John Lawless

Date: 10/12/2014 8:40:00 AM

What a visual, Autumn dancing on the edge of winter. congrats on the high placement.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 5:55:00 AM

Excellent take on this November theme, Joseph. Beautiful metaphor....and enjoyed the icy pirouettes. Congrats on a merited win. // Paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:23:00 AM

woohooo many congrats i loved this the first time i read it:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 1:45:00 AM

Lovely imagery, congrats on the win, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:19:00 AM

Love the way you extended your metaphor for November. This is so pretty, Joseph and it's great to see you doing so well in my contest. Congrats.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/8/2014 1:32:00 AM

Another thing Joe. Good luck in this contest if you're entering it! xxx D.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/8/2014 1:29:00 AM

Very beautiful Joe! Amazing imagery I enjoyed. Love peace and light! xxxx D.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/7/2014 4:24:00 PM

I agree with Carolyn, this is going to be a winner. Icy pirouettes is a great phrase. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2014 3:32:00 PM

Dear Joey, an awesome depiction of the wind whipping the snow in "icy Pirouettes." You have a winner here for sure! Love, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2014 3:00:00 PM

- I love the "icy pirouettes" - A wonderful winter image, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2014 2:55:00 PM

Pure magic this is- Yes!!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/7/2014 2:53:00 PM

This is pretty :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2014 2:46:00 PM

This will hopefully dance its way into the winners list. Hugs Jan xx