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My vibrant white and yellow mums all wilt when mid-November comes. Bright swirling leaves of gold and red will soon lie still upon their bed. I’ll wait till afternoon to walk and wear a coat when cold winds stalk. This month brings more than dying leaves, short days, long nights, and cold that weaves through nature and into our bones, bare trees and icy wind that moans, more time indoors, and grim gray skies, with matching moods and weary sighs. November can assuage the gloom when asters and bright pansies bloom, lift spirits with a harvest fest or day of thanks, for we are blessed, or move a poet’s sluggish muse with nature’s unique mid-fall views. Date: October 25, 2020 Poetry Contest Title: Completely Your Choice (33) Sponsor: Brian Strand Date: November 25, 2020 entered in the On Your Mark, Naturally, Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 10/29/2020 9:46:00 AM
Lovely colors amidst Autumn gloom! Nice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/29/2020 11:18:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
Date: 10/26/2020 5:17:00 PM
I think you've nailed November pretty darn well, Janice.... Though the 2nd stanza was just 'too true.' Brrrr. Thanks, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/26/2020 8:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. I tried to balance it out with positives in stanza 3. :-) Janice
Date: 10/26/2020 1:27:00 PM
a delightful tribute to November:-) hugs jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/26/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. Janice
Date: 10/26/2020 11:57:00 AM
Wow! Thank God I live in Hawai'i! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/25/2020 8:28:00 PM
Amazing poetry, takes one there to share your beautiful rhyming.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/25/2020 8:54:00 PM
Harry, thanks a million. Janice
Date: 10/25/2020 4:14:00 PM
this is so beautifully rhymed, janice! a wonderful tribute to november - best of luck in the contest...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/25/2020 4:30:00 PM
Ilene, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 10/25/2020 4:08:00 PM
Wish October could last longer, not a big fan of wet and cold November. You captured it well in your verse Janice. Good luck Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/25/2020 4:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Date: 10/25/2020 3:20:00 PM
You described November very well... Your poem is full of imagery..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/25/2020 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
Date: 10/25/2020 2:14:00 PM
Your poem flows beautifully Janice in this ode to November--- in not so easy to execute form.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/25/2020 3:27:00 PM
Thanks a million, Vijay! Janice

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