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Not Meant To Be

Azure tongues lick sandy shores, erasing steps, lovers trod. And their fragile footprints fade, as cascading waves applaud. From a golden horizon, sunbeams gild the edge of night. And white clouds cluster below a rising moon's saffron light. But beauty goes unnoticed, for passion has fled the scene. And concealed behind despair, love can no longer be seen. Doubt has reared its ugly head, destroying hope yet again. And two hearts split asunder, letting anger mask their pain. Forever dreams unravel like they were not meant to be. And two lovers walk away, their tears absorbed by the sea. (Quatrain) 4/25/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 8:14:00 AM
Touching poem about lovers conceding that things aren't working out. Well done Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/1/2015 3:51:00 PM
Very nice work Emile! A 7 indeed!
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Date: 5/2/2015 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Wally, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/27/2015 3:15:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery A7
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:47:00 PM
Thanks Etienne, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/26/2015 6:06:00 AM
This has a surreal beauty and images that touch on the magical. Love "cascading waves applaud" fantastic line.
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Monterey, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/25/2015 12:45:00 PM
This is very nice Emile. Such a smooth flow, good rhyme and a clear message. Pure pleasure to read. Diane L.
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Date: 4/25/2015 4:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Diane, your encouragement is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/25/2015 9:46:00 AM
Bbbbbeeeeeaaaaaaauuuuuuutttttttttiiiiiiiffffffuuuuullllll. Like Tennyson. #7
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Date: 4/25/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Nandita, your continued encouragement is much appreciated. Emile.

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