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I have no tears left to weep, my dears my heart has turned to stone life is dreary and I am weary, weary, weary all my grief and fears I have thrown I am alone in this earthly place, my dears tormented by stormy cold reality oh, grief, I say be gone I surrender to my destiny folding, folding my wings, wings, wings and with a final gasp "beauty" I wish to see perhaps a red f a l l i n g leaf just like me drowning in the abyss a red leaf twirling into eternity __________________________ February 8, 2018 Poetry/Verse/'No Tears Left To Weep' Copyright Protected, ID 18-1002-455-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, March 18 Premier Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Fourth Place

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Date: 3/13/2018 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful!and Congrats on your win. Best wishes.Hempstone
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:20:00 AM
Hem thank you for the beautiful and congrats
Date: 3/12/2018 10:36:00 AM
So deep and beautifully sad, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:18:00 AM
Sandra thank you for the beautiful and congrats
Date: 3/11/2018 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful, moving poem, Constance! Janice
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:17:00 AM
Janice thank you for the beautiful and congratulations
Date: 3/11/2018 6:50:00 PM
Love the style in this awesome emotional poem, BW. Well done. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 9:16:00 AM
Line thank you for the congratulations and the compliment
Date: 3/11/2018 6:41:00 PM
Great expression of sadness and loneliness, Constance. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:15:00 AM
Agnes thank you for the congratulations
Date: 3/11/2018 4:04:00 PM
The depth of your sadness and grief reaches beautiful heights Broken Wings. Captivating poetry. Congratulations on your excellent win!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 9:14:00 AM
Susan thank you for the congratulations. Yes my pen was just dripping with sadness and grief for this one
Date: 3/11/2018 2:30:00 PM
I feel your aloneness, if you look around and spy a crumpled dried brown leaf falling beside you, it will likely be me.
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:13:00 AM
James Thank you for visiting and I love the brown leave falling with me
Date: 3/11/2018 3:29:00 AM
Never surrender...but beautiful in context of your winning poem. Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 9:12:00 AM
Barbara thank you., I think my forever grief has made me stronger and a much better poet. I can feel sorrow in my very bones
Date: 3/9/2018 1:28:00 PM
Oh my dear friend. I believe adversity may color life, but we have the privilege of choosing the color.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2018 9:10:00 AM
Carlos thank you for that lovely comment

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