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No Promise, Please

Better no promise to me give, Words vouched seldom a long life live. Say, you’ll try, meet again, I’ll wait as if you were rain, Like rain, shall let you when you leave. Joy there’s in love to wait, As there’s in getting wet— Moments spent with you to re-live. ___________________________________________ Musings | 10.01.17 |

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Jcb Brul

Date: 1/31/2020 4:42:00 AM

I love the expression used in this splendid write. Feeling like they are my words, too. Thank you sir A. Jez Burl

Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 1/31/2020 5:54:00 AM

Lovely seeing your feedback here, thank you so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2019 2:43:00 PM

I liked this. The first five lines were limerick form. I thought maybe you were going for a double limerick but it is like one and a half! Lovely message in it too.

Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 2/14/2019 12:20:00 AM

Some poem, you often feel, you don't write them; they get written. This one came out of nowhere. Thank you Andrea Dietrich for the feedback.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2019 5:44:00 AM

A beautifully-penned poem, Aniruddha. I hope she rejoins you as you wait for her in the rain. Hugs, carolyn

Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 2/14/2019 12:24:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn D for the feedback. About she rejoining, no, thanks but there's no chance, let Hope hope.