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No-Name No: 1

I'm lost a deer at night in front of headlights when conversation stopped you would pause and that was all. you deserve a round of applause made me forget where I was! oh yeah,  i couldn't budge i needed you like a drug.  you did too sometimes because you wanted to get high can I curl your toes tonight and breath more tonight? i'm recovering with you still above me taking up my thoughts, my time, you are seductively drugging me. -don't you leave me -please -don't you leave me! -I didn't mean a word I just said -please girl, -believe me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/14/2012 9:24:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciated the feedback and I hope you're celebrating life.
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Date: 9/12/2012 3:19:00 PM
Always good to be two. Take care of love. Like your poem - it's well written. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2012 10:12:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one! Nice seeing a new face. (well, new to ME anyway).
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