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No More Forlorn Hope

Death led me to forlorn hope’s drain along separation terrain toward destitute-anguish plane bereft of home anchor and brain… Once overwhelmed with grievous pain* my afflicted heart did complain questioning God I knew was vain as my Dad struggled for breath’s gain… Yet His grace over me did reign cheering my faith against gloom’s stain with Dad’s last smile, sans struggle-chain lingering, till we’ll meet again… Thus, forlorn hope could not remain against triumphant bliss domain since Christ’s promises never wane offering peace from hurricane.
*Revelation 21:4 And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away. April 29, 2021 3rd place " This or That, Vol 2" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 5/13/2021. Title Chosen: Forlorn Hope

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Date: 5/14/2021 11:55:00 AM
Wonderful song of hope Beata - so real illustrating the emotional impact of hope on grief. You and I both chose the same aspect of hope. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of hope. Love that piece of scripture. Truly not all of Revelation is hopeless. The last chapters are words of beauty and hope.
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:29:00 PM
A fantastic, deeply moving piece here, Beata! It touched me. Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 4/29/2021 7:42:00 AM
Beata, What a word in mixed feeling; hope. His smile, your strength remains to carry you through the days. -Richard
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