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Morning comes these eyes too heavy to wake not knowing did they even sleep all night writing of those lips brushing gently across my cheeks rough drafts no longer remembered after the twenty-fourth toast to your kiss this mind's amiss the well's gone dry and I'm parched silence echos thru the stillness as I keep on mouthing your name too many days are wasted waiting for the right one to come let me be your moon a reflection off you and your sun what is, what was, what's done no more, no less nothing to expect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/21/2018 11:29:00 AM
I have given up. I feel the loneliness in this one, Tim. masterfully written, as always.
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Date: 7/21/2018 6:51:00 AM
Tim, this is gorgeous! Such a beautiful blend of words, romantic and melancholic.
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Date: 7/20/2018 6:48:00 PM
wow, REALLY nice, Tim. One of your best. You are one of the best writers here of romantic poetry.
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Date: 7/20/2018 4:53:00 PM
You don't need to find the one to shine..What a wonderful poem this is.A blend of romance,sadness,acceptance and love..Outstanding.
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:58:00 AM
So beautiful and so tragic
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Date: 7/20/2018 6:58:00 AM
I really liked the opening lines... Immediately i am pulled into your moments. hugs x
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Date: 7/19/2018 3:10:00 PM
Inspiration seems to have found your pen. This is beautiful, romantic and passionate. Your thoughts are simply breathtaking. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/19/2018 1:14:00 PM
Oh I like this Tim. The ending feels freeing with acceptance and peace :)
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Date: 7/19/2018 8:05:00 AM
Don’t stop, keep searching. I’m sure you will find her. You make your romantic pieces feel real. Excellent as always.
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:51:00 AM
Like a sensual, poetic dance.. you reel the reader into your story. May your Muse always be as she is now!
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:47:00 AM
Swoon. Damn you're good at that.
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