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No Looking Back, M'Lady

No looking back, m'lady. to the long days spent in that garden. No looking back on the labors of love -- watering and pruning and waiting. You remember the vibrant smell of un-cut lilacs on the bush. You are no longer a lady in waiting. For he has chosen you to replace his first love. Wearing now her fine clothes which you helped fashion into their loveliness. Do not be ill-at-ease. Recalling how often on your knees you polished this very same floor to perfection. Be reminded of your new task. Your new calling - you must make of him the man he never was, the man he can be. No looking back, m'lady. written 3/21/2013 entered in Love is the Answer, contest by Lu Loo

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Date: 11/20/2019 7:55:00 AM
no there shouldn't be any looking back. great poem all around dear Poteet, may you be blessed today. ~ thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-) ~luloo
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Date: 11/21/2019 7:32:00 PM
Thanks, Lu Loo, glad to participate always and happy with the placement. Appreciate your blessing, I ate Thanksgiving Feast with my kindergarten grandson and got my hair done, in that order.
Date: 11/19/2019 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 11/21/2019 7:31:00 PM
TY, Brenda for the encouragement and support.
Date: 4/14/2017 11:25:00 PM
Beautifully written, Reason! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2017 8:20:00 AM
very thought provoking..."the man he never was, the man he can be." my favorite line in the poem- wraps it up perfectly. sorry for the delayed comment! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/31/2014 7:58:00 PM
Enjoyed the write and congrats on the fine win, Reason
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:22:00 PM
Reason, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:23:00 PM
Very elegant well written poem! Thank you for submitting this to my contest.
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Date: 3/24/2013 2:51:00 PM
Sort of "My Fair Lady" turned upside down, I gather. Very nice! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/23/2013 5:27:00 PM
Reason, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda
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Date: 3/22/2013 11:24:00 PM
This is both alluring and disturbing at the same time. A very effective piece.
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