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Nine Eleven, 2005: In Memoriam

Today the hands of time wound back the clocks to morning, mourning-mired, clocked at forty-six past eight exactly when wanton wings wrought terror's shocking stat: two thousand forty nine! All ground to zero with the towers twin turned dust-cloaked debris choking in a cloud of acrid smoke and all shed tears are gathered now in limpid pool of pained reflection roiled by roses with their thorns, in silence piercing hearts again, their old wounds yet unhealed by salving hands of time.

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Date: 10/19/2009 3:42:00 PM
You have done this topic justice, Miguel, your words are heartfelt and beautiful. Thank you also for your comments today on my Rite of Passage. It didn't make the cut for the contest, but comments like yours are what matters. I am so glad it brought back such beautiful memories for you. ~Trudy~
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Miguel Mendoza
Date: 5/10/2013 2:54:00 AM
Thank you so much! But I have to apologize for this long overdue reply. You see, I've been away from Poetry Soup for quite some time. Hope to make up for lost time starting with my recently-posted poem.
Date: 10/19/2009 1:34:00 PM
Excellent piece Miguel, what more can i say >> James
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Date: 5/10/2013 2:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot. Having been away from Poetry Soup for quite some time, my reply to your comment is long overdue. Sorry. Starting with a newly-posted poem, I hope to make up for lost time. Thanks again!
Date: 9/26/2009 12:29:00 PM
almost made me cry. very well written. we all should remember that day.-------Ell (P.S. my dad was in the Pentegon when the plane hit, thankfully he was on the other side of the building and is okay)
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Date: 5/10/2013 3:19:00 AM
I was in New York the other year but failed to go to the site of the Twin Towers, but had some pictures taken with the names of those who perished as background at the New Jersey memorial park. Thanks for your comments. But I have to apologize for this late reply, having been away from Poetry Soup for quite some time. In some ways, I have tried to make up for lost time with a newly-posted poem.

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