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Nighttime

sun goes down light turns dark ~ arise crescent moon amongst shimmering sparks Bite Size Poem no23 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 13/10/2021 syllable counter PS 17

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/14/2021 6:58:00 AM

I see the crescent moon through your words-you so beautifully describe. Great images in just a few words, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/14/2021 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, the sky at night never ceases to amaze me, bringing natural clarity when life doubts, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/13/2021 11:49:00 AM

When the stars are twinkling brightly like scintillating sparks, the crescent moon is sometimes disregarded as a brilliant source of illumination during this time of nighttime splendor. Good take for the contest David, wish you luck as always.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/13/2021 12:13:00 PM

Hello Lasaad, I am amazed when the brilliant moon is shining how many celestial bodies are still visible in the sky even one's pretty close to the it, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/13/2021 10:00:00 AM

as in the stars being those shimmering sparks? The crescent moon is often overlooked as a shining light. Good impressions, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 10/13/2021 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Jenna, those sparks are indeed stars, or perhaps any cosmic body that might cast a light in the Night sky, cheers David