Get Your Premium Membership

Nightmare Dreams

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Emile Pinet.


      

When your inner monsters invade your dreams, your beleaguered brain can play tricks on you. And from a nightmare, you awake to screams, it feels so real you're convinced it's true that demonic demons have broken through; and powerless, there's nothing you can do. Feeling helpless, you know you're in peril and cannot shake off that feeling of dread. It's like your dog suddenly goes feral and you're not sure if it's alive or dead as it chases you looking to be fed, your feet tangled in the sheets of your bed. Anxiety rises and starts to peak, as your heart begins to pound in your chest. You feel disorientated and weak, stuck inside of a dream that you detest but you can't wake up, though you try your best, while panic ensures that you'll get no rest. When you genuinely think you might die, the scariest nightmares can make you cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/17/2018 11:22:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 4/18/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/30/2018 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Emile! That is such a nice gift to give as a prize. I love my copies. Thank you again! : )
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 1/30/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I always look forward to your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/27/2018 7:47:00 PM
I felt my spine tingle with your intense imagery Emile. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/26/2018 10:42:00 AM
Spot-on description of a nightmare, Emile. CONGRATS! Janice
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/25/2018 10:33:00 PM
Very good, Emile. You have portrayed the essence of a nightmare perfectly IMO. :) GL in the contest.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 1/26/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2018 4:11:00 PM
Well descriptive poem for this contest Emile. :)
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 1/24/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I hope you enter my contest my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/24/2018 3:46:00 PM
Boy can I relate to this poem. Your scary imagery is expressed so well in this chilling piece Emile! I lie awake, afraid to try to go back to sleep. I hope this is a top pick Emile! : ) P.S. I look forward to entering your Valentine's Contest.
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 1/24/2018 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Connie, as always your comments are much appreciated my friend. Should you or Andrea win first place you may choose someone to receive a copy of my book if you like, insomuch as you both already have a copy. I will be holding more of these contest to distribute my books around. Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs