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On New Year’s Eve we gathered excited to pop champagne. In unison we did it. Bubbles – like upside-down rain - poured into the air. They were like small pearls or tiny moons carrying our bursting joy - those miniature balloons! Oct. 19, 2020 for nette onclaud's Impressions Poetry Contest Picture #2

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Date: 10/25/2020 8:48:00 AM
Love your creative metaphors Andrea. Love this piece. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/25/2020 6:45:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, I looked at this picture for ages, I just couldn't invoke anything to write about. Congratulations on your placement. :-)
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:16:00 AM
Lovely poem, Andrea, so effervescent. soup mail.
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:31:00 PM
That's a fantastic rain, Andrea! Sure, it will keep the top award on your hands that created this wonderous pearl!!
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:02:00 PM
Pearls of wisdom? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/20/2020 10:17:00 AM
Your upside down rain simile is brilliant, Andrea. I love the bubbly excitement of a New Year's Eve party you captured. GL
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Date: 10/20/2020 7:59:00 AM
Great interpretation of the pic Andrea, cheers. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 10/20/2020 7:00:00 AM
Great interpretation!!! Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 10/20/2020 6:33:00 AM
Nice response to the image...
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Date: 10/20/2020 6:02:00 AM
I like your interpretation of the photo--celebration in your words.
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:29:00 AM
You chose a fine picture and loved the comparison to the champagne. ~~
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Date: 10/19/2020 9:34:00 PM
Great job fitting your words to the image. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/19/2020 8:31:00 PM
Beautiful lines with latent suggestions ... wonderful creativity ... reading your poems is always a pleasure, Andrea ...
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