Never, Always, Sometimes

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NEVER will I stop loving you It does not matter what you say You have a place with me to stay No matter what you ever do ALWAYS know what I say is true You do not have to feel the same You can think it is all a game SOMETIMES life makes no sense at all I pray each day that you will call No questions asked, no one to blame +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Written 2-17-2016 Form: Rhyme Decima (10-lines with 8 syllables per line in the following rhyme pattern: ABBAACCDDC)

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/5/2018 9:41:00 PM

I have NEVER read a bad poem you have written, I am ALWAYS impressed by what you have written and SOMETIMES I read them more than twice.

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/6/2018 1:38:00 AM

Ahhh... :) You are so sweet!

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 6/29/2018 1:57:00 PM

Very heart felt! Come through and read a couple of mine.

Susan Gentry
Date: 6/29/2018 3:32:00 PM

Thank you! I sure will. :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/4/2018 5:57:00 PM

I love this picture and I love this poem. I totally relate to this.

Susan Gentry
Date: 5/4/2018 11:25:00 PM

Thank you! Sad to say, no update to it... still the same. It doesn't hurt as bad now as the day I wrote that though, that's an update :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/23/2016 11:04:00 PM

Thank you again for your congrats! I look forward to reading your extensive writings but this title caught me and it's a new form to me! It expresses 3 timely truths that can be applied from right now! I will learn from your writings, Thank you Susan!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/22/2016 8:47:00 AM

Excellent-well-written and moving! Janice

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/23/2016 1:03:00 AM

Thank you Janice!