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Natures Wonders

Along the deserted beach I walk Above I hear the seagulls squawk Coloured shells all over the sand Majestic waves so fine and grand Wonders of nature before my eyes . Written 16 June 2018. For when five lines enable your poem to thrive. Sponsored by Silent One.

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Date: 2/15/2023 9:04:00 PM
The sea and seastrand are repositories of endless wonders of nature. Enjoyed your beautifully rhyming poem.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/16/2023 12:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, nothing beats the beauty of the beach and coastline and the lapping of the waves. Happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/21/2018 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tom! In 5 lines you wrote a refreshing and beautiful poem. Well-written!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/21/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congratulations Susan. Tom
Date: 6/19/2018 3:21:00 PM
Natural and pretty!! Congrats for your fine win.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/19/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, Tom.
Date: 6/19/2018 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Tom,,love the poem, so much it says in 5 lines.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/19/2018 6:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, happy you liked it. Tom
Date: 6/18/2018 10:18:00 PM
Back with congratulation for your podium placement, well worthy, always a winner in my book! Mick
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/19/2018 1:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Mick, much appreciated. Tom.
Date: 6/18/2018 1:53:00 PM
The image you paint so eloquently is one I see every day, Tom, but never tire of it. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 2:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn for your good wishes and congratulations. Tom
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/18/2018 1:58:00 PM
Just saw the winners' list and cme back with congratulations!
Date: 6/18/2018 10:25:00 AM
Nicely penned Tom...nature at its best...love & light...^WW^
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you WW, yes, no better place to be. Tom.
Date: 6/18/2018 9:11:00 AM
A short and sweet winner! Wonderful piece Tom. Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Maureen. Tom.
Date: 6/18/2018 6:41:00 AM
Hello Tom, Congratulations on your win!! A masterful rhyme and very-well executed. A brilliant theme too. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Gary, happy you enjoyed it. Tom.
Date: 6/18/2018 2:32:00 AM
Ecstatic! Congratulations my dear friend, Tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 2:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios. Tom
Date: 6/17/2018 8:35:00 PM
A lovely walk! Congrats, Tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 2:14:00 AM
There is none better, thank you Kim. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 5:21:00 PM
coming around with my best congrats to you, tom!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/18/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Nette. Tom
Date: 6/17/2018 12:35:00 PM
- I visit your poem Tom, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thank you ever so much Sunshine, hope your having a good weekend. Tom
Date: 6/17/2018 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations, dear Tom, on a well-deserved win! This piece is so lovely, full of amazing imagery extolling nature's exquisite beauty! Hugs and blessings on this Father's Day! Pandita
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Pandita, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 9:49:00 AM
Happy Father’s Day Tom :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, all those piggy backs when they were younger and being taxi man as they got older has paid off, my three lovely daughters have spoilt me today. Tom
Date: 6/17/2018 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win Tom; can hear the seagulls squawking!~Che :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl, I do love the beach and the magical sounds it produces. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 9:30:00 AM
Tom, love the imagery in the poem. :) luck in the contest....Hugs Eve ~' *
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 10:04:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Eve. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 7:13:00 AM
You provided a moment of wonder with these five lines. A most deserving win. Congrats.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Richard, the beach never ceases to fascinate me. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Tom, a joy to read. :))
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Roy, a scene I've witnessed many times. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Tom :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. Tom.
Date: 6/17/2018 6:24:00 AM
Sounds lovely.. is there a beach near you?Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you SO, sadly not I'm about an hour and a half from the coast but have got the Avon flowing through the town, again thanks for hosting. Tom.
Date: 6/16/2018 9:05:00 PM
Indeed! A visual feast with your vivid and vibrant imagery Tom. Beautiful! Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 4:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Susan. Tom.
Date: 6/16/2018 2:43:00 PM
- What a view !!! ... beautiful, Tom :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/17/2018 4:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine. Hope your weather is better today. Tom.
Date: 6/16/2018 11:52:00 AM
charmed by the radiance of your words, tom..nature becomes you, tom!..huggs
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/16/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette. Tom.
Date: 6/16/2018 11:48:00 AM
I think in virtual reality I've joined you there by the sea. Walked and talked about nature Your daughter used her pager. Super virtual memories. ................................................................................................. I thank you Tom, truly pleased. Good luck in the contest. Mick
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/16/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Mick. You do have a great memory. Glad you enjoyed. Tom

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