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Natures Test

Branches reach out to the sun Ocean waves push to the shore Raindrops falling, one, by one Natures lust will reach for more The burning hatred in my chest Burns in my soul and to my core Bounded due to natures test My greedy hands will reach for more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2011 1:05:00 PM
I have read several of your poems and am honored to post a comment. Many may view your poems as morbid, eerie or gloomy{the ones I've read surely seem to be}. No one really knows the artist from the standpoint of intentions or message being conveyed.Be it may, you have an beautiful-extra ordinary way of displaying creativity from emotions which is a wonderful gift when writing is concerned. Your work are pages of art and I am just a happy fan of your pen-manship!
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:01:00 PM
Dana, sweet ... vision,,, i like ,, even the greed of ones soul wanting more... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:43:00 PM
It seems you are passing thro' some emotional state, if it's biographical, Dana.
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