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Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet-Summer Park

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Eyes of God shine bright through trees on the left; Trail’s that wave’s concrete wet from evening rains; Dark tree branch of active signs of arrest; Custody beauty verdant green leaves veins; Visions of green layered high left to right; Emerald arouses opens my eyes; Into skies brilliant colors floral lights, visions attractive plants purple baptize; None here except flowers you and I God; Garden your air I breathe gives so freely; Green ever so cleans the earthen lands sod; Found heaven surreal ideally; My spirit soul awes! For God’s garden breathe; Eyes of God shine bright through trees on the left; 6/24/19 Placed 7th place in Contest For NA re-run Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton Originally For Nature Scene-Orphan Sonnet Poetry Contest date 6/8/19 Enter Sonnet poetry form only Sponsored by: Dale Gregory Cozart

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Date: 7/9/2019 9:25:00 PM
A sonnet of such beautiful appreciation, James. Glorious imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful recognition in the contest. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/9/2019 3:45:00 AM
Beautiful write, James. Good luck in the contest. Sonnets are never easy to write!
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