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Nature, My Kryptonite

the green hue of the forest in Spring and Summer as I follow a winding rocky trail as bees buzz and butterflies float and drift here and there my hair a flowing golden river the twitter and songs of a hundred hidden birds a rippling clear stream with mossy rocks the dappled trees and wildflowers and ferns the clinging vines the falling colors of Autumn and I am lost in a sea of trees and red, gold, and orange leaves that twirl and swirl the earthy smell of change and I twirl in the stained glass forest with delight and decay as the threads of Summer wither I gather pretty leaves to press in old books as squirrels scamper looking for nuts buried and the forest is a poetic temple silent with imagination the hushed bitter cold of Winter in the forest as the ice hangs in the air whispering the snow crackling under my boots and frosty pure white snowflakes like filigree lace fall leaving my lips ice-kissed I feed the birds from my mitten hands and ice is dripping, dripping, dripping the cold forest beckons to me and inspires me as I am a Winter child ____________________ September 21, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/nature my kryptonite Copyright Protected, ID 09-1390-224-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Your Kryptonite sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 10/21/2021

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Date: 9/26/2021 10:34:00 AM
How beautifully and creatively you took this challenge, Dear Heart. A win I foresee!!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2021 5:03:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the visit ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/26/2021 3:12:00 AM
This poem without any hesitation, I predict is a top win. Spectacular verses, and I wish you oceans of luck, though doubt you need it. Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2021 5:04:00 PM
Jennifer, thank you so much for the nice compliment on my poem. I hope Anthony likes it ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/22/2021 9:45:00 PM
Hello Constance ... what a beaut picture you painted with words. Wonderful nature verse indeed - thank you Constance - Lindsay
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Constance La France
Date: 9/23/2021 8:18:00 AM
Lindsay, thank you so much for the visit and compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/22/2021 7:05:00 AM
wonderful write. God bless you always friend. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2021 8:19:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment on my poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/21/2021 9:34:00 PM
I feel that you are an all-seasoned child as I read this gorgeous write.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/22/2021 8:20:00 AM
Caren, thanks for the visit and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/21/2021 11:18:00 AM
Hello Constance, I am born in winter. it is not my fav. season. My fav. season is summer instead. I like the warmth of the sunshine. I enjoy not wearing heavy clothes and boots. I rather wear running shoes and sandal. Serenity & Love Darlene
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Date: 9/22/2021 7:08:00 AM
Hello Constance, winter is beautiful for the first snowfall. or after the snows falls and then rains the icy snow frozen on the trees is beautiful. Serenity & Love Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2021 5:45:00 PM
Darlene, I like Summer too for the flowers and the green lush of everything, but Winter speaks to me ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/21/2021 9:36:00 AM
Exquisite writing, Constance. I loved this one especially, although I'm not a great fan of winter. The last stanza made me feel a chill.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2021 5:46:00 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment, oh I love the ice chill of winter and there is nothing more beautiful than walking in the first snow fall ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/21/2021 8:34:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/21/2021 8:41:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

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