Summer

Egrets wade a pool Lazy summer pollywogs Wriggle to get free 6/8/2017

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/28/2017 5:33:00 PM

This is a great Haiku Dean. I haven't seen pollywogs in a while!! Hope all is well :)

White Wolf

Date: 6/12/2017 7:41:00 PM

That's it, Dean! Really well done, my friend!

Dean Wood
Date: 6/13/2017 10:11:00 AM

Thanks wolf!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 6:40:00 PM

very nice!!

Dean Wood
Date: 6/11/2017 7:49:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. Are there white egrets near you. Real pretty and graceful. - Dean

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 6/9/2017 12:08:00 PM

great one poet Dean

Dean Wood
Date: 6/9/2017 12:18:00 PM

Thank you ETT! You have a critical 'eye'. Your compliments are treasured. I appreciate the time you took. - Dean

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2017 9:17:00 AM

Great visual! One of the best! Saving!

Darren White

Date: 6/9/2017 2:50:00 AM

The image is absolutely wonderful. Love it :)

White Wolf

Date: 6/8/2017 10:18:00 PM

A great haiku, but it would appear your syllables are 7/5/7 and not 5/7/5? Is this intentional? Just curious!

Dean Wood
Date: 6/9/2017 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Wolf! This was not intentional. I appreciate you helping me out. I have tried to modify it to get it right. Thanks for bringing that to my attention. - Dean