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Native American Winter

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Below is the poem entitled Native American Winter which was written by poet Barbara Gorelick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Native American Winter





            Cold Walker came in the night
            Throwing down his white blanket
            The People sat by the fire
            And told their stories


11/9/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 11/19/2015 5:40:00 PM
Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:35:00 AM
You've painted a beautiful picture here. Wish I were there listening.
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Date: 11/14/2015 7:50:00 AM
Barbara, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT
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Date: 11/13/2015 8:41:00 PM
This is unique! Great write, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/13/2015 8:05:00 PM
the most original of any I have read Barbara...congrats to you!
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:24:00 PM
I enjoyed the unique take on your poem, Barbara! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/13/2015 2:53:00 PM
Like your unique take on the winter theme Barbara many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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