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for the Angel In Disguise contest

It’s said she’s an angel in disguise. She grew up in a small French town, Playing on her Re’ island’s shores. She’s a mother now, and all that implies, Routinely going about her nightly chores, After working in the neighboring town. Like many other soldiers’ wives, Moving yet to another Army town, She got used to packing and unpacking drawers She followed me across the skies, Without complaining or keeping scores. Without ever seeming to get rundown; Now that I’m retired, there’s no more goodbyes. She doesn’t have to run the house alone. Painting the bedrooms, fixing faucets and doors, And finding other problems—SURPRISE! Tearing carpeting off a real wood floor. We now have a real house of our own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 5:00:00 PM
Home is where the heart is, your love for your angel shines brightly in this lovely write. Congrats on this win. Hugs
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Date: 4/6/2015 12:04:00 AM
Mark, making one last stop.... Thank you, and Good night..Linda
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Date: 3/21/2015 8:29:00 AM
Home sweet home! Congratulations on a fine win.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:07:00 PM
Belated thanks for commenting. Like tbhe old place, but it may be the financial ruin of me!
Date: 3/20/2015 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/1/2015 4:08:00 PM
Thanks belatedly for commenting.
Date: 3/20/2015 4:29:00 PM
So touching and heartfelt, Mark! Congrats on your win! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 4/1/2015 4:08:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Nelly did too.
Date: 3/20/2015 2:39:00 PM
Congrats Mark.. Beautiful poem :)
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:08:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Nelly (Mrs H) did too.
Date: 3/20/2015 2:14:00 PM
MARK, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Skat.
Date: 3/20/2015 2:04:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Linda. Nelly liked it too.
Date: 3/20/2015 1:05:00 PM
I love your taken on the theme mark congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Nelly liked it too.
Date: 2/28/2015 5:31:00 PM
It is a great feeling to make a house into a home. I am glad you've found an angel to live with forever... A very nice tribute to your wife! Well done, Mark. Good luck in Isaiah's contest!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:11:00 PM
Still working on fixing it. I think it will be an ongoing process. Nelly liked the poem too. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 2/25/2015 6:09:00 PM
lovely place to be in life..Im glad you have a home of your own. lovely poem. BG
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2015 4:12:00 PM
We needed one. We lost the rental we had prior; was tired of renting, too.

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