Get Your Premium Membership

My Valley

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Victor Buhagiar.


Often I meander down the verdant valley, Easily to descend the well-known smooth way, Occasionally I halt with stimulation overwhelmed: How exhilarating and inspiring is the feel of May. The birds whirling above the grove below. How they love to fly in and out of trees planted so wide, While here and there new-born lambs and sheep graze The luscious grass that grows on the hill side. I arrive at the grove, trees all around, such a familiar place after all those years I touch, and as expected there in the middle was the old and gnarled oak tree we loved so much. On the trunk still chiseled, a heart and our names. That's where we first met, my loving wife and I. Now that she's in heaven, I still shed a tear. For she will always be mine, living in bliss up high. 18 November 2021 Subject 9 Valley ''V'' New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/29/2021 1:11:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your Second place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2021 3:19:00 AM
Oh Victor your poem is very touching and heartfelt and a little sad….beautifully written! Debx p.S love the picture!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/23/2021 7:39:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Have a great Thanksgiving with family. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2021 6:56:00 PM
Beautiful visions your words create of a beautiful place. You’ve some very valuable memories to ease your pain Victor. All the best for peace in the valley… Belle
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2021 8:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I can't imagine the pain that you must feel each time there is a reminder of your wife. I know that you are getting by here on earth but I am sure you often think of her in her heavenly home. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2021 2:15:00 AM
A beautiful entry into contest Victor, lovely...Delice
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2021 7:35:00 AM
Time and place will always carry a huge part of who and what we were.. time and place will always bring memories we hold so dear even though they are of deep pain and joy.. so beautiful and heartfelt are your reminiscing musings, Victor! I liked and enjoyed so much your honouring words to a so precious beloved.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2021 5:01:00 AM
Beauty from the heart, Victor, lovely:)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2021 10:07:00 PM
Hello Victor ... a fine tribute indeed Victor. Recalling those fond memories is possibly the best thing you can hold on to, and no one can take them away - thank you Victor - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2021 7:13:00 PM
A lovely touching write... So beautifully penned... And the final lines brought tears... Loved this ...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 6:42:00 PM
A lovely valley with verdant trees and grass with the oak tree where you engraved a heart reminiscent of your fifrst meeting and your pledge over an immortal love that will not end on Earth but will continue to eterninity !
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 4:00:00 PM
Lovely images and message in this one. Loved the image of whirling birds!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful lines Victor, I think trees have deep meaning to many of us, I know they do to me; some hold great memories within their branches. Nicely penned.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 11:25:00 AM
Such a lovely tale of reminiscences of an evergreen love, in a pretty green valley.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 11:22:00 AM
Victor, you have snatched a stunningly unique scene and powers of recall. There is a feeling of sadness, yet affection precisely never fades.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 8:16:00 AM
The romance of the vista and the tree with your name and your beloved…always. Beautiful write, dear poet!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 7:42:00 AM
A nice scene and memory. A sense of grief, but love never dies.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 6:50:00 AM
Always will be your love no matter what.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 4:47:00 AM
A beautiful place you describe, Victor, in this splendid write. Made ever more so by the memories chiseled there, evoked in the final stanza.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 3:01:00 AM
- A beautiful place, Victor ... a place where wonderful memory grows on every twig ... best wishes in the contest :) - Take care ... love and hugs //Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 2:52:00 AM
aww Victor, such a touching piece, i have a huge lump in my throat at the ending, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 2:34:00 AM
Nostalgic! Enjoyed the read, Victor! You do know how to grip the reader's attention
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 1:18:00 AM
This is a very beautiful nature poem. You are, indeed, great at it. Wish you all the best!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/18/2021 1:16:00 AM
Sounds a beautiful place Victor where you made happy memories and those are yours forever. Tom
Login to Reply