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Once My Soul lived Within a Deep sea of azure Blue that darkened to indigo When I finally realized that I had found you. Now my omniscient life, once empty of love, sings perpetual songs of happiness. <...................................> 2/14/16 Heart Symphony Contest Sponsor: Nayda

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/8/2016 7:37:00 AM

Hi Lin. The enchanting pic makes me feel like living in the ocean, lol. Congrats on your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2016 7:40:00 AM

Hello, Teddy. I would love to live there...what wonderful things yet to be discovered. Thank you.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 2:00:00 AM

A must read poem Lin! You deserve the win! Congratulations! :) -HANS

Lin Lane
Date: 3/6/2016 4:45:00 AM

Thanks so much, Hans.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2016 11:05:00 AM

This brings a peaceful feel. Congrats on your win.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/2/2016 2:21:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Rick.

James Inman

Date: 3/2/2016 8:45:00 AM

Ahh, what a sweet write Lin. Loved the reference to deepening feelings as the color deepened from azure to indigo. I usually use indigo as a color of dark feelings.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/2/2016 9:03:00 AM

Thanks so much, James. Indigo blues are very deep...in total agreement with you on that one.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/1/2016 7:48:00 PM

Lin, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Lin Lane
Date: 3/2/2016 9:02:00 AM

Thanks, Luloo. hugs to ya!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/1/2016 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2016 6:48:00 PM

Thanks so much, Nayda. That's a great new picture of you. Your smile is dazzling.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/1/2016 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the Heart Symphony contest, Peaches. If you are happy I am happy. Peace my dear friend:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you, Danny. All is well.

White Sage

Date: 2/16/2016 6:25:00 PM

your soul once lived in the sea? hmmm, then you must have experience of how i can breathe in that kind of coloured water, though colour here is red...please do give me an hint....just toying around lol, this is an excellent fibonnaci Lin, you're just awesome, best wishes

Lin Lane
Date: 2/17/2016 5:05:00 AM

I'm thinking I should send you a fan club membership card, but you'd be the only member..lol Thanks for always being so encouraging, Sage.