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A Cracked Mirror

My soul a cracked mirror where falling tears drip, drip . . . Oh, must brush this aching aside or die! ________________________ May 24, 2017 Cinquain/A Cracked Mirror Copyright Protected, ID 904122 Early Summer Standard Brian Strand First Place

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Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2017 7:32:00 PM

So much is evoked in so few words! As always, you bring a tear ! Well done BW !!

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/4/2017 7:31:00 PM

A very sensitive poem..congratulations

Rick Parise

Date: 6/4/2017 2:58:00 PM

Lovely/Somber..........a great resonating thought is left.....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2017 1:54:00 AM

I agree with Victor here. this is very raw and I think it's something that all can relate to at some time or other in their lives. This is a contest I want to do. I forgot about this one! Soupmail for you. a part two!!

Chris Green

Date: 5/24/2017 5:24:00 PM

Such a sad and heartbreaking poem my friend. Deeply emotive and soul touching.

Dean Wood

Date: 5/24/2017 2:49:00 PM

My heart just aches when I read your stuff! You are a master of drawing out feelings. Well done. Good luck with your contest! - Dean