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My Quiet Place

In my quiet place it's just you and me. In this darkened room, only you can see. My heart is on the floor for you to truly know all the things I have done, that have taken over me. I turn my eyes away, I feel the deepening shame, but I feel you deep in my soul, and know it's all ok. You remind it's all passed, no longer who I am. You tell me it's not what I do now, and hold me in your hands. It's in this quiet place, I just sit with you. Crying through it, because you have seen all I do. I pray that you save me from this life that I knew, that you take this mind make it whole too, rid me of these things that I used to do. In this quiet place it is you holding me, the darkness surrounds, and you are covering.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 4/16/2011 5:17:00 AM
A poem of such deep emotions, dear Lori. Many congrats on your fine feature of the week, Lainie
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Lori. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Lori
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Book: Shattered Sighs