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He had planted the palest, pastel, peonies with pink petals- placed in a pretty pottery pot he painted purplish-plum and proudly packaged it in paper with a pleasing patterned print; presented it to me- a poignant, precious, perfect, present. December 5, 2017 ~1st Place Contest: Your Selection Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 01/25/2023 ~1st Place~ Contest: Alliteration Sponsor: Barry Stebbings Judged: 12/08/2017

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Date: 1/25/2023 4:11:00 AM
Presented and packaged to be praised!!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Margarita, for your uplifting comment! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/25/2023 2:36:00 AM
Perfectly profound Sandra. :) Cheers - Gary
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gary! Sandra
Date: 1/4/2018 4:41:00 AM
A sweet write Sandra. Peonies, the perfect winter flower, I like purple ones.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/31/2023 5:33:00 PM
James, thank you so much for your visit and encouraging comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 12/10/2017 8:09:00 PM
OH this is WONDERFUL, Sandra. Congrats on a well deserved win.Wish I could see more of your poems but this is a really hectic week for me. Already comments I had waiting for me have scrolled off my comments page OH MY! (I hate when that happens before I can get back to those poets)
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Date: 12/9/2017 3:42:00 PM
Sandra, a charming and graceful write. Beautiful word choice and smooth as silk. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest.
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Date: 12/9/2017 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra. Very well written :)
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Date: 12/9/2017 1:58:00 AM
Congrats, Sandra, on your win. You deserve it:-)
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Date: 12/8/2017 10:54:00 PM
Positively perfect poetry Sandra, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 12/8/2017 8:58:00 PM
Very nice.
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful, Sandra, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 12/8/2017 5:13:00 PM
Perfect alliteration Sandra, congratulations
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:42:00 PM
PERFECT POEM !!! many congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2017 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your top place, Sandra. I thought this was charming with a pleasant word flow. // Barry
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:26:00 PM
Barry, thanks for the great contest and my awesome placement! I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Sandra
Date: 12/5/2017 7:35:00 PM
Fun and fabulous alliteration, Sandra. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/5/2017 2:47:00 PM
- A playful and great writing, Sandra - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise, for your nice visit and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/5/2017 2:06:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra. Totally delightful.
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Date: 12/5/2017 12:23:00 PM
Well written Sandra. Very nice :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Line! Sandra
Date: 12/5/2017 11:21:00 AM
Love this Sandra!! Nicely done :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Judith, for your visit and nice comment! Much appreciated. Sandra

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