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My Pen Bleeds Love

I never meant to fall in love with you, but the first time we met I was entranced. Was it your yellow golden hair? Was it your blue eyes like a clear lake? (in which I was drowning) Perhaps it was your voice like a drifting melody? But, I was enchanted and I loved you with all my heart, oh, what a wild whirlwind romance; and then you were asking me to marry you, and I whispered yes into your ear. It was a magical wedding with snow falling around us, and we promised to grow old together; with our promise of eternal love, but, there was another destiny written for us. Now, you are but a star shining bright above for me, and my life is without you in it but our love remains; and I must come to you in a cemetery, for you are but a name engraved. You come to me in dreams just as I remember you, with that blonde yellow hair and blue, blue eyes; and we swirl and dance the night away, as we did on our wedding night. I pick up my pen and write love poems, with a pen that bleeds, bleeds for you; and as I write- I sing a love song, "Look at the stars, look at how they shine for you and everything you do." (Yellow by Coldplay) _____________________________ February 10, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/My Pen Bleeds Love Copyright Protected, ID 20-1224-540-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Famous Poetic Lines 3 sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 2/23/2020 7:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2020 10:01:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and hugs_Constance
Date: 2/23/2020 5:59:00 AM
This could also have been used for Romeo is bleeding... so many have lost love like this.. a deep and emotive poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2020 10:02:00 AM
Silent, thank you for another inspiring contest, for my placement and for the nice comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 2/10/2020 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful... and so sad. Gorgeous piece Constance. xomo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2020 1:37:00 PM
Maureen, thank you for visiting my poem and for the beautiful _Constance

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