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My Old Soul

I have died a hundred times I have lived a hundred rhymes I have been a woman and a man I lived in wars that cut me down I lived with love and riches bound I lived and starved with pain and grief Every life some short some sweet Every life I fought to keep Every life has brought me here Every life I treasure and fear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/6/2018 10:48:00 AM
Simple yet very deep. I love it..
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Date: 3/5/2018 6:56:00 AM
Very deep Niall, you really are an old soul..
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/5/2018 11:18:00 AM
Hi Silent One , thank you for comment , yes I do get a kind of a feeling , kind of gut feeling , kind of a just knowing my friend ::)))
Date: 3/4/2018 7:43:00 PM
Such a deep and awesome poem Niall about the 'plan' that our soul's have to live and learn the lessons they need to learn to evolve to higher planes of spirituality. A meaningful, intriguing and insightful write my friend! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/5/2018 2:02:00 AM
Hi Susan , thank you my friend ,' learn to evolve to higher planes of spirituality' well said :::)))) hugs
Date: 3/4/2018 2:59:00 AM
Great write niall. Some days I feel like such an old soul. I wonder why I keep coming back. Why haven't I learned what I'm supposed to :) Thank you for coming to read my The Young Girl :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/4/2018 3:48:00 AM
Hi Debbie , thank you for comment and it is always a pleasure reading your writes :::)))) hugs
Date: 3/3/2018 5:16:00 PM
Love your poem, Niall. That is a beautifully aged soul you have.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/4/2018 2:02:00 AM
Hi Line , thank you my friend , have a lovely Sunday ::))) hugs
Date: 3/3/2018 11:58:00 AM
- Many lives in one soul ... who knows ... great written, Niall - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/3/2018 12:35:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , thanks for comment , some time I feel I was here before ::))) hugs
Date: 3/3/2018 10:45:00 AM
thought provoking lines Niall hugs Jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/3/2018 10:52:00 AM
Hi Jan , thanks for comment ,, some times I get a feeling I was here before ,,::)))) Miss Brown lol :::))))) hugs

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