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My New Wish

~*~ I saw a star between the leaves That still remain upon the trees And as I watched this morning view I wished that you could see it too Then as the sun began to rise In pastels on the eastern skies My new wish then became to be That you could see it here with me ~*~

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Ann Kershaw

Date: 10/3/2019 10:14:00 AM

Very sweet poem. Brings imagery and thoughts, feelings together. :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much Ann. I appreciate your visit and kind comment today.

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/3/2019 6:20:00 AM

sweetly done Chris :-) This is a beauty x

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:19:00 AM

Thank you Elaine. I appreciate your visit.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/2/2019 5:59:00 PM

Yes, this is when wishes should come true...a beautiful romance to come.

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend for always being so kind to me

P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/2/2019 1:38:00 PM

swoon. How romantic. Love the way this flows. :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 2:20:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Happy this made you swoon. :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/2/2019 1:08:00 PM

Seems wishes are in the soup air !! I"m with Carolyn on this one.. seeing such beauty alone is just not the same. YOur poem is kind of dreamy !! Hope you, too, get your wish !!

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 2:20:00 PM

I noticed that. : ) Thanks so much Debra, from one wisher to another, I appreciate you my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/2/2019 12:59:00 PM

Seeing the beauty of nature is always more fun when we share it with someone. Your poem has a beautiful flow and I can relate to your message. Many times I see something and wish there were someone with me to appreciate it fully. Well done, Chris! Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 2:19:00 PM

It sure is, trying to explain what you saw is just not the same. Thank you so very much Carolyn for always being so nice to me.

Hello There

Date: 10/2/2019 10:48:00 AM

A beautiful wish in so many ways ~ another uplifting, even dreamy, piece...

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 12:42:00 PM

Thanks so very much my friend for stopping by this morning and leaving such a nice comment for me to find.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/2/2019 9:50:00 AM

A beautiful romantic piece Chris. A true love poem. Simply put and straight from the heart. My kind of poem. Lovely, God Bless, JB

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 12:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much Judy. I am thrilled you enjoyed this

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/2/2019 9:44:00 AM

I can see the beauty of it all..from a distance.So romantic and beautiful..

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 12:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much Charmaine. You kind comments are always so nice to receive.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/2/2019 8:45:00 AM

I love how you always bring us into your scene, allowing us to see the beauty of your mornings or visions...you are a rare talent my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Sandy, so very much. That is a very nice thing to say.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/2/2019 8:30:00 AM

So sweet! Ahh I bet she wishes too!;) great write!;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so very much Brenda.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/2/2019 8:20:00 AM

Lovely, Chris. Very sweet.

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Line

John Hamilton

Date: 10/2/2019 8:10:00 AM

What a nice way to start the day, thanks Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you John.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/2/2019 8:09:00 AM

I love this, Chris. It's beautifully written and I wish I could express myself so beautifully. You're truly blessed with the gift of words. God bless you

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 9:18:00 AM

I think you do a wonderful job of expressing yourself in your poetry Regina. I know I enjoy it. Thank you for your kind words.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/2/2019 8:01:00 AM

I can see this in my mind, even though the skies are gray today. I hope you have a nice day. Thank you Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/2/2019 9:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi