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My New Form Is Being Used- I'M Tickled Pink,Tell Me What You Think

I’ve tried out a brand new form It’s strange and not quite the norm It’s been tried by two Now how about you? It’s honey, so start a swarm!! Tried by R L and F J Just let your pen find the way To bring it some fame Please join in the game Try it…now what do you say? Eileenesque sounds so divine You need to try out your rhyme Reverse the quatrain No, it’s not a pain Results can be quite sublime! This is my one shot at fame I know, it does sound so lame Make my wish come true Or I’ll just be blue My life...will not be the same!!! I want to thank Richard Lamoureux and F J Thomas for trying out my form. My poem…and the explanation of the form you will find under this title….Revenge’s Reward….Richard’s poem is Word Play….and F J Thomas’ Poem is Life’s Invincible Circle- Eileenesque! YES!!!! I had originally thought each stranza could have a mono-rhyme going on so it would be easier to make that fifth line that is tagged on to each quatrain “fit” but you can compare and contrast and give your own feedback. I’m just tickled pink that these two lovely friends and poets made my…..DAY…WEEK…and MONTH!

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Date: 2/27/2014 5:46:00 PM
I've read the rules three times my little Desert Orchid, and I'm still scratching my head lol. but I'll be having a go at this, Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/2/2014 5:46:00 AM
OH, Really, Mr Seal??? You're not just saying that to make me happy? I would be so thrilled!! Honestly....Listen...FJ did one...the Eileenesque...she gives pretty good instructions on how to do it...Yes, better than mine...Check hers out! HUGS!!!
Date: 2/27/2014 7:31:00 AM
Tim Smith wrote a poem called Sping Break in Eileenesque. It is very well done. So now there are three and counting. I will check out Flo's.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/27/2014 12:24:00 PM
YES!!! I'm SO SO thrilled! Yes, I did check his out...Oh...I'm getting giddy! :)
Date: 2/26/2014 8:31:00 PM
Eileen , I want to do this sometime. I just saw someone did one. How cool. Maybe it could be used in someone's contest sometime! You also might try to contact Marie Summers of Shadowpoetry.com. She has put my two forms up there in the new form category and maybe she is still adding new ones!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/27/2014 12:26:00 PM
Oh Andrea....I will give it a shot. What are your forms? Please do tell! Won't TPS add them here???? Did you try to add them here? Thanks so much for even wanting to try. I would honestly appreciate some feedback if you think that the mono-rhyme for each stanza is a good idea or the regular quatrain rhyme...Check out F J's. She gives an explanation perhaps that is even better than mine! Please, do get back to me, if you have the time. Hugs
Date: 2/26/2014 6:57:00 PM
Delightful . I will attempt to turn my feeble attempts at comedy into such a rhyme . Thank you Eileen .
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/27/2014 12:23:00 PM
Going to keep you to your word there! ;) HA HA! Thanks for even wanting to try. I'm touched.
Date: 2/26/2014 4:06:00 PM
I tried one Eileen.....tell me what you think
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/27/2014 12:22:00 PM
Tim....I came; I read; I smiled! :) Thanks every so much!
Date: 2/26/2014 2:21:00 PM
Eileen I may give it a try....sounds fun.....David
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/26/2014 2:24:00 PM
DAVID...I'd be honored!!!! :)

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