Get Your Premium Membership

My Moon

Like the moon In the night sky Controlling the tide You are the celestial body That pulls My emotional side Gives life to my ocean Wannna take you for a ride Across the universal divide Show you all the beauty Of you and me Interlock eternally Just like nuclear fusion The energy of unison Will create a Certain kind of love Those mere mortals Can only dream of So this slam is for you p.d. The only one With the inner beauty That can move me Soothing me With the continuity Of the flow Between me and you Continuously Expressing The bond of affection With a positive light Just like the moon In the sky at night I'm way over my head The feelings you compose (dedicated to the P.D.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/26/2015 5:38:00 PM
so sweet, Sea of love
Login to Reply
Date: 11/19/2010 3:14:00 PM
LOL;-) at the bottom funny comment. Hi Nathan, I love the num. my ??? well P.D. did with your moon poem. You guy's belong;-) no doubt about it. Love =(^.^)=Royal
Login to Reply
Date: 10/27/2010 10:43:00 PM
that was simply wonderful. I found it refreshing to hear a man be that good with words
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2010 4:17:00 PM
Nat, this is RHYME or verse...definitely not free verse for it's full of rhyming words...free verse has NO rhyme, okies? fine write just chnage the form name...Roger Dodger over and out!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2010 10:10:00 AM
I love this one Babe, dedicated to the only moon you need. I hope she is not better than me your perfect ocean...xoxoxoxoox,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2010 6:10:00 AM
a beautiful beast
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2010 12:19:00 AM
wow! Nathan, trulllllyyy does touch the land below. I super love this one.. This is one of your best poems,..xoxo,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2010 1:53:00 AM
Wow! babe, I love being your perfect ocean and the right size moon. You are handing me to many over whelming emotions, and i love them,, I love the style, and the energy behind your inspiration,.xoxooxoxoxoxoox,.love p.d.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs