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My mommy took him

I want to tell you a story, About a little boy, Who went up to his bedroom To get his favourite toy. But when he opened his bedroom door And popped inside his head, He couldn't see him anywhere And he had left him on his bed. So he looked inside the wardrobe, And he looked behind the chair, He looked on the window sill But still he wasn't there. So he started emptying boxes And pulling out the drawers, He didn't know what was happening He had never been gone before. His mother heard the banging And all the crashing about. So she went upstairs to investigate What the noise is all about. When she saw him sat there He had tears in his eye, She had never seen him so upset She nearly started to cry. Between the sobs he told her That he couldn't find his ted. That he had come upstairs to get him So he could go to bed. She told him it was to early, That they hadn't had their tea. Then we can snuggle on the sofa And watch a little TV. Then we can go and get your ted, So you don't have to cry. You can put him back on your bed, He will be nice and clean and dry.

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Date: 11/23/2020 9:38:00 AM
Simon, congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest with this wonderful write, it is delightful _Constance
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Simon Hamill
Date: 11/23/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank you constance,it's nice when you get a placement or win.but I do it because I enjoy it, and the people on here have all been so nice.take care.simon.:)
Date: 10/27/2020 8:14:00 AM
awww bless, too young to understand that ted needs a bath too. Can truly relate to your poem, nicely written Simon, Emilia : ) and welcome to the Soup
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Date: 10/27/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thanks.and it's good to be here.its nice doing something I like with people who understand.simon
Date: 10/27/2020 6:50:00 AM
Nice rhyme
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Date: 10/27/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thank you.i wrote it for grandkids.cheers.simon