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My Magical Nights

I lay in bed by the window side at night, gazing into the gleaming eyes of enchantress - the moon. She casts a spell of sweet dreams with her shimmering light and a serene slumber enshrouds me, a magical boon. A world full of colorful fantasies come to life and I swoon. Date: 08/06/2017 Note: For the contest ( English Quintain ) by Sara Kendrick. *Placed Eighth*

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Silent One

Date: 9/23/2017 5:20:00 AM

Enchanting sensual write... Just 8th?

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/23/2017 9:50:00 AM

Hi Afzal, I'm so glad I found this beauty this morning. And it was "a magical night indeed". Congrats on your win. Well done:-) Alexis

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/30/2017 1:43:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2017 5:23:00 PM

I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Good to have colorful dreams...Congrats on your placement..Sara

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/16/2017 12:45:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/14/2017 2:27:00 AM

What a beautiful post here. thanks for sharing. Good luck within.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/16/2017 12:44:00 AM

Thank you, Afolabi.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/12/2017 10:45:00 AM

A wonderful melange of moonlight images, Afzal. Very fine Quintain poetry.Only a talented can use the word enshroud in a poem ... and it brings more expressiveness to the poem itself. Wonderful write, my friend. Love always.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/13/2017 12:48:00 AM

Thank you very much for such a kind compliment, Freddie.

Alesia Leach

Date: 8/11/2017 5:51:00 PM

Sweet! Love the night! Congrats!!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/13/2017 12:48:00 AM

Thank you, Alesia.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/9/2017 10:02:00 AM

Lovely, descriptive poem, Afzal! Janice

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/10/2017 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Janice.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/8/2017 7:43:00 PM

A simple but flowing poem that espouses the moon as a Magical Sandman. Great Write!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/8/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thank you very much, Ralph.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/7/2017 10:26:00 AM

Such a nice picture, Afzal:) P.s. The first line, it is 'window' side right?

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/7/2017 11:54:00 AM

Thanks a lot for the correction, Jo.

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/7/2017 6:27:00 AM

Enjoyed reading and feeling the 'serene slumber' ... GL in the contest ...

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/7/2017 11:54:00 AM

Thank you very much, Probir.

Joseph May

Date: 8/7/2017 3:03:00 AM

An enchanting write Afzal....GL in the contest..

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/7/2017 11:53:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph.

Maria Williams

Date: 8/6/2017 5:59:00 AM

by the glow of the moonlight streaming in through the window, I enjoy your lovely words in' My Magical Night'. Good luck in the contest Afzal.....Maria

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/6/2017 6:53:00 AM

Thank you very much, Maria.