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My Love Story

(22/07/2011) I was walking to the diner that night, When you saw me with your cute smirkey smile I smiled back at you for a while, And noticed you took a deep sight Both were young and crazy A little piece of me said, he can be But my bigger piece said, how can he be But that smile was a thrill Until now it is still We now sitting together in front of the grill In our backyard behind the old mill Lucky me, I didn't listen to my heart I can’t imagine what if I erased his part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/4/2011 5:20:00 PM
Glad you found him and you are happy; you sound like it anyway Dinda! :)
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Date: 10/7/2011 3:48:00 AM
nicely put down.
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Date: 8/10/2011 4:59:00 PM
Your feelings sing and whisper all at the same time... True open the heart write,.. your fan Michael
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Date: 8/10/2011 12:54:00 PM
Lovely sentimental feelings, Dinda
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