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My Love Story

(22/07/2011) I was walking to the diner that night, When you saw me with your cute smirkey smile I smiled back at you for a while, And noticed you took a deep sight Both were young and crazy A little piece of me said, he can be But my bigger piece said, how can he be But that smile was a thrill Until now it is still We now sitting together in front of the grill In our backyard behind the old mill Lucky me, I didn't listen my heart I can’t imagine what if I erased his part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/12/2011 10:27:00 PM
I really like this, Dinda. and i can see you have been at Soup a while now. HOpe to see more of you!
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:24:00 AM
Your poetry has amazed me today Dinda. Thank you for posting it for us all to read and enjoy. Hoping you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol
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