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My Love !!!

Ho my god could this really be love at first sight Radiating with beauty like stars of the night With a shove from my mates, I stroll over quite slow Accidentally on purpose I nudge her elbow I felt chemistry from the very first glance I instantly knew I was in with a chance A couple more drinks, there's that look on her face within the next hour we were back at her place Ok had no condom, I'd drank all my cares A chat and a kiss, we were off up the stairs She must do this often, her lights very low Like I gave a damn, I was raring to go My head goes down low, just as far as it can I still can't believe it, yes she was a man I picked up my clothes and ran fast out the door Mates in the street, roll about on the floor As long as I live they won't let me forget My so called love and the night that we met

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/8/2010 8:37:00 AM
Shades of "The Crying Game"! This poor fella really didn't see it coming. Enjoyed the witty twist at the end and couldn't help but think of the movie and the expression of Stephen Rea's face when the "lady" he admired turned out to be a man. I hope you've entered this one in the "Opposite Sex" contest because it gives new meaning to the contest's very name. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2010 4:34:00 AM
LOL... thanks for sharing... well written my friend
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Date: 5/8/2010 2:25:00 AM
I see the mates all having a great laugh. :) :) a nice flowing style here, good one Carolyne. ...Margaret
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Date: 5/8/2010 2:14:00 AM
good morning , nicely done on the love you expressed in your write today,..p.d.
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