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He feared not his death, because he came to know well, Him who gave us all life’s breath. He worked at his goal, taking life’s problems in stride, Humility was in him. I remember him smiling, laughing and patient, as generous as could be, adoring his wife, happy for her attention, Respectful of his children. I was glad to be, a part of that family, even though for a short time. I was too young then to understand what Love is. He showed me, I’m glad to say. A real team player, encouraging and docile, Bedtime found him on his knees. Joe knew his business, and set reachable short goals, His long range goal was heaven. 5/30/11 This tribute to my good friend Joe T. is my first of this Sedoka poem form which is Japanese in origin. Six line stanzas 577577. Each stanza is called a Katauta. I found it easy to communicate the desired message with this form.

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Date: 6/30/2011 2:29:00 AM
A nicely flowing piece, with a good, warm message. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:31:00 AM
Fine tribute to your good friend Robert, a delight to read :)
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Date: 6/9/2011 11:51:00 AM
loved this one Robert a job well done on this Sedoka, very creative.
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:44:00 AM
Hey Rob, What a beautiful tribute to an amazing friend "Joe". How blessed you are to have had him in your life and I'm certain he felt the same affection for you. To learn to love does not come naturally for all yet Joe not only knew but he rubbed off on you! Love this write... Lay
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:30:00 PM
Robt- Goosebumps and leaking eyes from this emotional write. A real gentle giant this friend of your. I love his take on life with his respect and devotion..he sure did know his business if he prayed to God on his knees each night..eyes set on heaven's plight! You are very blessed to have walked with him in this life, Robt. Thanks for this beautiful tribute to remind us what life is all about! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/31/2011 1:29:00 PM
Your epitaph is priceless. Like the form and the devotion to a good friend. Love, daver
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:53:00 AM
Sincere and heartfelt poem Robert. Example of great writing .Anne
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:09:00 AM
very nice tribute and great form Robert.. so nice to share in your good friendship with him luv.. enjoy your day..
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:22:00 AM
there cant be anything better than this poem addressed to a friend . Very very very beautiful .
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:43:00 AM
excellent sedoka robert especiall for you first time keep writing them pls luv*Skat
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Date: 5/30/2011 8:17:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Robert.A great tribute to someone really great.
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Date: 5/30/2011 5:54:00 PM
love stanza three
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