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O pussy cat, pussy cat! Do be careful, dear. Look at the moon so bright, A slice of magic from above. See the birds enchanted Still flying though it’s night, Careful, my sweet babe, You’re too much near the edge And it’s so easy to fall into the sea. Remember neither you nor I Know how to swim. We are too young, my sweet. But we’ll grow up And I’ll become a lady. I’ll wear a beautiful black gown Adorned with sequins all over. They’ll sparkle in the night. That is my favourite time. I’ll go near the water’s edge. Maybe go for a swim too. Look a heron flying high. It is a sign of good fate. I’ll follow her Even though the woods. Who knows, maybe, just maybe There will be fairies there. Hark that is a harp playing Magic melodies for us all. Perhaps we’ll have a summer party. Oh, what a great event that will be. We will be happy you and I Forever and forever more. But for the moment we’ll just sit here, Above the placid sea, Me, pussy cat and the moon, And dream our future dreams.

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Date: 12/1/2022 4:22:00 PM
A magical place to be you and me, my kitty. Playful and sweet, Victor!
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Date: 11/27/2022 10:46:00 AM
i would sure love it if MY cats would be content to sit near me for a long time like in your poem. Sweet write
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Date: 11/23/2022 8:10:00 AM
An enchanting write Victor. You always amaze me with your work. hugs! :)
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Date: 11/22/2022 6:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this work of fantasy. Very creative on your part. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by page. Sara
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Date: 11/21/2022 7:36:00 PM
Did you write the poem seeing the picture or choose an image so apt to suit to your poem? However there is great blending, dear friend !
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Date: 11/21/2022 4:28:00 PM
Very cute, Victor!
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Date: 11/21/2022 3:12:00 PM
Well done sounds like an old traditional children's story that never goes out of fashion. Robert
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Date: 11/21/2022 1:13:00 PM
This is most endearing Victor :)
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Date: 11/21/2022 12:51:00 PM
- Love it, Victor ... so sweet :) - hugs
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Date: 11/21/2022 12:22:00 PM
Such a sweet poem, replete with childhood dreams. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 11/21/2022 12:11:00 PM
Will be happy you and me forever and ever. That would be a blessing. Enjoy reading. Nicely done. Blessings my friend
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Date: 11/21/2022 12:04:00 PM
A sweet dialogue you convey, Victor. A charming poem you wrote. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 11/21/2022 11:04:00 AM
Another string to your bow Victor, a lovely verse for children. Tom
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Date: 11/21/2022 9:21:00 AM
This is such a sweet piece Victor. It fits so well with the picture here. It belongs in a children's book of rhymes. I had such a book when I was a little girl and it was my favorite. I read it all the time and looked at the pictures. Wonderful. It brings back memories. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/21/2022 8:51:00 AM
Victor, Your writing is well-crafted, interesting, and empathetic. The story of life is intrinsically disputed, yet your enthusiasm for romantic efforts never fades.
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Date: 11/21/2022 8:20:00 AM
Well crafted, delightful, sensitive writing. A history to ponder in your not so surface poem, the story of life, how we grow into adulthood, and all life's possibilities for happiness with a smart hint to be careful. To add to your affection for romance, a fine children's book in your divine writing future I would think. Blessings.
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