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My Friend, My Love

My friend, my love- you are the first one that I see when I wake. Your lips are the only lips I kiss. Before I sleep, I press my lips to yours, my sweet. You are the keeper of my secrets, the one at each day’s end I wait to greet. Jan. 18, 2019

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Date: 1/23/2019 6:17:00 PM
I married my best friend, can relate, such a beautiful expression of eternal romance!
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Date: 1/20/2019 1:18:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, You excell in the Etheree form. I loved this from start to finish. It was filled with love and very romantic. I loved the two last lines" You are the keeper of my secrets,the one at each day’s end I wait to greet." I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/19/2019 7:31:00 AM
A special tribute this is, Andrea, to the one you love. Great sentiments!
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Date: 1/19/2019 3:00:00 AM
I love how you embrace the challenge of forms and succeed in befriending them time after time. This is love served etheree-sweet. Good luck w/ contest and all else. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 1/18/2019 11:55:00 PM
How I love this poem - very special words Andrea, keep that image always in your heart! Soup mail later. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/18/2019 9:50:00 PM
A beautiful tribute. You sound pretty much like a newly-wed, and that is great Andrea. Keep that up!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/18/2019 10:56:00 PM
haha, everything is just not as easy to do as before!!
Date: 1/18/2019 8:42:00 PM
Very nice Andrea!
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Date: 1/18/2019 6:48:00 PM
Yes, the keeper of your secrets...lovely, Andrea!
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