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My Friend And Me Nursery Rhyme

My friend looked so sad and blue So I brought him to the zoo When he held a big, fat rabbit It scratched him a little bit. He dropped it and went to see giraffes But they gave him some annoying puffs He waved his hand with a shout “You don’t make me smile but pout!” I brought him to the other side To view a monkey taking a ride But the monkey alighted on his bike To pinch him like a naughty tyke He whined more and cried I told him, I’ll always be on his side We went next to the dancing crocodile He giggled and gave me his sweet smile We continued our long zoo journey He held my hand, he was so happy We watched the painting elephant Our day together was triumphant Nov. 17, 2022 6.33am Be Creative Contest Judged: 11/21/2022 7:35:00 PM Sponsored by: Eve Roper Place 1 (out of place 4 multi-w)

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Date: 11/23/2022 2:21:00 AM
Children will greatly enjoy this lovely rhyme.A visit to the zoo had always been in my wishlist as a child . Congratulations Len on your first place win.....
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/23/2022 3:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Valsa. God bless you always my dear friend. Hugs
Date: 11/22/2022 11:47:00 AM
- A lovely children's poem, Leonora :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs and <3
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/22/2022 9:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your kind words and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Annelise. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 11/21/2022 10:10:00 PM
A very beautiful rhyme. Congratulations!
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/22/2022 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your kind words and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. God bless you always. Hugs
Date: 11/21/2022 8:01:00 PM
Len, thank you for entering the contest. I love your very creative children nursery poem. Congratulations on your win. Wishing you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. Many blessings to you and yours. Eve
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/22/2022 9:10:00 PM
Welcome but I thank you more my dear friend Eve for the inspiration through your contest and for acknowledging it through my win. It means a lot to me. I can use it in school for teachingg. Tytytysssm. Thanks a lot for your loving wishes. A Very HAPPY THANKSGIVING too my dear friend. God Bless you always. Hugs