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My First Ball

I've been waiting for this magical night This year at last I'm old enough to go The lights of the palace are oh, so bright A sight that sets my anxious heart aglow The gowns, lovely hues, skirts gently sway Whirling, twirling with the bowing, bending The steps that delight and demand attention Seems a kaleidoscope of color never ending Just a small sip of wine between dances A warm embrace and a quick stolen kiss Silken words from my handsome admirer My unforgettable night of youthful bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/26/2014 9:36:00 PM
NICE WIN
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win BG
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/16/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by..I have to go look at the list, haven't had a chance yet.
Date: 12/16/2014 2:58:00 PM
Short compared to some of the poems but I feel you have made every word and sentence count by filling them with beautiful well expressed words. A pleasure to read Barbara. Congratulations on your win.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 12/16/2014 4:09:00 PM
thank you Brenda, I am not able to write stanza after stanza..Iam what I am..lol. thanks again..
Date: 12/16/2014 12:09:00 PM
beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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