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MY FAVOURITE HORSE



His mane is long and he is very proud
He neighs and roars and laughs so very loud
Always blissfully joyful as could be
Many funny stories he shares with me

My dearest horse loves day and night to prance
Forever asks me won’t you learn to dance
Whenever he decides to come to life
That’s when he asks me to become his wife

I stop I look I laugh and laugh some more
I know we would be happy to the core
Under the setting sun just him and me
But you should know that I am only three



Submitted in March, 2018

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Date: 4/17/2018 3:26:00 PM
So charming. It all made sense when I got to the end. I have a similar poem where I am in love with MIghty Mouse. I actually skated over the frozen pond in our woods as a young girl singing my love for Mighty Mouse. I told you I was weird.
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:36:00 PM
Weird is wonderful, Andrea. Everyone knows normal is boring. Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:13:00 PM
This is delightfully done. Very cute.
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:31:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Sian.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:41:00 AM
Very clever, Line! Shades of "Mr. Ed," the talking horse on the TV show of that name back in the 60's...Love it! :) gw
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Date: 3/12/2018 11:27:00 AM
LOL Thanks for your humorous visit and comment, Gershon. Line xx
Date: 3/12/2018 8:21:00 AM
I love this one Line! Brings a young ones imagination to life!! Well done!..8)
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Date: 3/12/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much for your fun visit and comment, Pat. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2018 4:36:00 PM
Awwwww...how sweet. I did not see that ending coming. Every little girl falls in love with a pony. This is sweet.
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Date: 3/11/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Eileen.
Date: 3/11/2018 10:17:00 AM
Hi Line: Love the surprise ending. Perfectly captures the imagination of a 3yr. old. SuZ
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for you visit and comment, Suzanne.
Date: 3/11/2018 8:10:00 AM
Such a cute quatrain Line. I can imagine the fun she has with the horse. We once had a miniature horse (not a pony) - His father was the smallest miniature in the world. We had a lot of fun with him. Thanks for sharing that..Maria
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Date: 3/11/2018 3:32:00 AM
Whimsically fun!
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2018 1:56:00 AM
Very, very cute!
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, Nina. Very appreciated.