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My Eternal Valentine - Valentine's Collection

(Valentine's Collection) 14. My Valentine I find you within my heart A beloved rose My heart is becalmed Your love the ship I do sail ripples of desire My soul is aflame You light my fires of passion love shines in my night My love is flowing It runs into your ocean Our hearts sing sublime My Valentine I find you within my heart A beloved rose 18/01/2019.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/24/2019 9:28:00 PM

These senryu are gorgeous Mike. I loved all of them. I love that you used the first stanza to end your poem as well! Bravo! xxoo : )

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/28/2019 8:23:00 AM

Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always find these smaller forms harder to do. The collection still continues. The heart still has many songs to sing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2019 3:38:00 PM

ohh , i sigh and smile at your lovely dedication, vlad... a dreamy work from the heart!...huggs

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/18/2019 5:03:00 PM

Hi Nette, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. A song that sings from the heart. I am glad you felt happy for reading. This collection is for everyone. I am enjoying doing these writes. The heart is still singing and the collection goes on. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2019 11:59:00 AM

How wonderful it would be to receive a Valentine card with verses such as these! Enduring love is conveyed beautifully, Vladislav. Hugs, Carolyn

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/18/2019 3:28:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece. It is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The collection continues. The rose still sings and the heart still speaks. The journey does continue through the collection. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/18/2019 11:34:00 AM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/18/2019 11:11:00 AM

I believe you are meant to be writing these beautiful poems! A favorite :)

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/18/2019 11:38:00 AM

Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this write, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked piece. Maybe you are right Heidi. I just decided it was time to write a Valentine's collection. I am enjoying doing so. I am still not finished with the Sonnet form yet. I still have two different forms to go. Still letting the heart sing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX