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My Dearest - a Short Note

my dearest - you are a flute a soft caressing whispering beckoning harmonic flute when I see you my entire body becomes an ear (Feb. 26 2016)

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Elaine George

Date: 3/20/2016 8:41:00 AM

Very creative, my poetic friend. I love personifications. I have written many of them...my most noted entitled, 'Violin'.

Elaine George
Date: 3/21/2016 5:08:00 AM

My pleasure, J. Tudor. Elaine

J. Tudor
Date: 3/20/2016 9:03:00 PM

It is so quiet here, I was surprised to discover a new comment! Thank you for reading, and for introducing me to your wonderful writing as well. J.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/27/2016 8:47:00 PM

This was really cool, Tudor, and your metaphor very intriguing (and they says guys don't listen). Welcome to the site ... always nice to see new faces.

J. Tudor
Date: 2/27/2016 9:11:00 PM

Thank You for looking in and leaving such kind thoughts. J.