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My Dearest

my love, I have written you these last words for you must make a journey up above but you can take my heart . . . I will be forevermore broken by your young death, and recall holding you in my arms 'till your last earthly breath; I whispered love you- and will whisper that often, as this tear-stained love letter I slip into your eternal coffin. I thought, we would grow happy, old and gray cannot recall a day we fought . . . and will treasure each precious day, I love you so much and will always carry you with me. Now, sail my love on the soft waves of the sea, forever, ever my true blue love and darling. "oh, you visited me today in the song of a starling . . " _______________________ January 7, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/My Dearest Copyright Protected, ID 01-1319-313-07 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, The Last Love Letter sponsor, Mystic Rose, Rose, Judged 01/08/21 Submitted to the Standard contest, Podium Placing Promise (7) Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/13/21 Second Place

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Date: 1/8/2021 10:25:00 AM
A poignant last letter. It's your specialty. Love the sorrow that it evokes. ~~
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Constance La France
Date: 1/8/2021 11:52:00 AM
Victor, thanks for visiting, yes it is my sad poetry style, for sure _Constance
Date: 1/7/2021 10:46:00 PM
_Constance, I love the visit in the starling's song. Perhaps, a moment in memory of a loved one, though sad, is still a way of showing your affection in loss. -Richard
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Constance La France
Date: 1/8/2021 8:59:00 AM
Richard, thank you for visiting my poem and for the comment, my poem is true and my husband loved birds so it is natural he would visit me in a bird song _Constance
Date: 1/7/2021 8:00:00 PM
What a terrific missive for this contest. It feels heaven-sent my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/8/2021 9:00:00 AM
Caren, thank you so much for the visit and compliment on my poem, appreciate a lot _Constance

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