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Hi Soupers, I have know idea if this is a Dr. Seuss poem or not. But the Seuss contest inspired this piece. Enjoy:-) Alexis
I took a trip to the local zoo And met a monkey named Abu I gave him a big yellow banana and he wore a cool bandana While at the local zoo The pet monkey Abu Who ate a big banana Liked the cool bandana I had so much fun playing in the sun It got really late I said bye to my date And my furry friendly date waved bye through the gate Did I mention? I had fun while playing in the sun With my new pal Abu who lived in the zoo and ate a big banana while sporting a bandana Inspired by The Dr Suess contest 3-17-17

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Date: 4/15/2017 9:43:00 PM
Cute, I love bananas :) Thank you for coming to read my Like an Angel,,, Yes I believe in angels since I was little. My first poem was about angels. But I wrote ones like you have up there also, like my Sparkling Pebbles Or my Trouble with Trolls,,,,,, Happy Easter :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 11:22:00 PM
Very cute and cool Dr. Seuss inspired poem Alexis! Enjoyed~Che :)
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:46:00 PM
This was fun and very Seuss like Alexis. Great job with this my friend. Monkeying around is always a fun way to spend a date.
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Date: 3/20/2017 8:24:00 AM
Hi Chris, I'm glad you liked my first attempt at a Seuss like poetry. It's always fun to " monkey around " with a furry date. Welcome back: -) Alexis
Date: 3/18/2017 3:17:00 PM
Real cool Seuss poem, Alexis. Loved it. The monkey wearing a bandana was such a funny sight. Fabulous write. A double 7 poem. Love and hugs, dear.
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Date: 3/18/2017 10:54:00 AM
Well done Alexis , a great Seuss inspired write.
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Date: 3/18/2017 7:30:00 AM
:) It is sweet, to be sure. I loved the part about your furry date....Hugs, dear...
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Date: 3/18/2017 3:12:00 AM
I think you did great, Alexis! The rhyme and flow are right on (write-on?) and the content more than works. Enjoyed it, love how lighthearted and fun your poem is. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/17/2017 7:38:00 PM
I agree with Arthur this is cute and it makes a lovely fun children's poem! :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2017 7:14:00 PM
Loved this! so cute!
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