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He Fills My Cup

Mornings begin with my savior His richness every day fills my cup On loan is his bounty and flavor He helps this wracked body stand up. The warmth of his substance is welcome His essence spells relief to my eyes Full with his sweetness I’m spared boredom Without him this wracked body cries. One connection with him's not sufficient I thirst for the nectar of his soul Without his strength I'm deficient With his nourishment this body can stroll. When I’m wandering without much direction And I’m listless and moving too slow I just look to him for more gumption- He's another good cup of hot Joe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/6/2016 11:08:00 PM
RANDY CURRY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:26:00 PM
Ha like the end Randy, Glad to read your poem today. Love -LINDA-
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Date: 12/9/2013 8:22:00 PM
I sometimes feel the same way when I need another cup of coffee. Let me see, better go get it now. Great Write, great flow and the reader just doesn't know even at the end just like in "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost. Very good.
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Date: 9/23/2013 4:51:00 PM
A good read. Thanks for sharing...another cup of Joe.
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Date: 8/15/2013 3:19:00 PM
Nice twist in this poem . I thought you were referring to God as your savior but in the end it turn out to be a beverage... (LOL)
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Randy Curry
Date: 8/15/2013 4:18:00 PM
you read it as intended. I believe the form is burlesque. thank you, Christine, for reading. ran
Date: 8/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
gREAT POETRY. I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED IT.
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Date: 8/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
GREAT POETRY. I THOROUGHLY ENJOYED IT.
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Date: 7/23/2013 12:13:00 AM
haha, I like the humor mixed into this one at the end!
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Date: 7/19/2013 5:02:00 PM
Very creative work about the coffee addiction..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Randy Curry
Date: 7/19/2013 6:41:00 PM
Sara, thanks for reading; glad you enjoyed it. now i'm gonna go make a cup. haha. ran

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